Darkwater's early rise[open to all riverclan cats]

[fleabittengray]

Darkwater awoke and looked around him. He still wasn't used to the warrior den. He streched and licked his paw. "This is amazing!" he said aloud, "How could my father have betrayed this wonderful Clan? I must find him, where every he is. I must do it for my mother." He felt a lump on his throat. "Why did he kill her?" he whispers. "If only she were still here! We both could have come to RiverClan! She would still be here if I hadn't left her!" Not true,he thought to himself,You would have been killded to. He sighs and lays down again. It feels as if his heart has been broken in two places.

[*Nimbles*]

OoC||
Could you please, turn your posts into past tense? That's how we roleplay on this site.

BiC||
Nimblestep heard Darkwater's mutters and he perked his ears and faced the tom. "Great, huh?" he said and smiled. He twitched his tail and stretched out in one fluid movement and gently began to lick his front paw.

[fleabittengray]

[Oh yeah! srry i 4got! ~sigh~ ill try harder]

"Oh hi i didnt know you were awake!" Darkwater said, clearly embaressed. "Um sorry what was your name agin? its hard to remember everyones." He picked up his paw and licks it, then draws it over his face

[is that getting better?

"I was hopeing to go hunting later. WOuld you like to go with me?" he asked, his mind still on his murdered mother and missing father. He got up and streched his tired muscles once again and paced.

[please give me any tips! thanks!}

[Windfleet]

"Nimblestep, Darkwater." Flydew had emerged from the Warrior's den, shaking her pelt in the sun. "Hunting, you say? That sounds good," she mused, carefully sitting down and licking her paw. "I wouldn't mind some exercise myself. Been cooped up to long in this camp." Standing up, she began to head over to the fresh-kill pile. "What time?" she called over her shoulder.

OOC:// Blech. This post sucks, but I need to get off, sorry...

[Blackstar]

Blacklight had been trying to sleep as he heard cats beginning to wake up and start talking. knowing that he wouldn't be able to sleep anymore he opened his eyes. "morning." he said as he lifted his head from his moss bedding. "Did I hear you say you were going hunting? We could make a patrol of it." he said, thinking of his new position as deputy of Riverclan.

[fleabittengray]

Great! My first patrol! DArkwater thought. Maybe I can catche Darkwind's scent?... "I dont know what time. Blacklight, what do you think? You are the Deputy afterall!" Darkwater waited impatiently. He hoped he caught even a stale smell of his father.

[*Nimbles*]

"How about sunhigh?" Nimblestep suggested to Blacklight. He smiled at Darkwater and pulled his tail around his paws. "It's Nimblestep," he said cooly and watched the clan wake up for a moment. Nimblestep smiled at Flydew and padded out after her to the fresh-kill pile.

[fleabittengray]

"Sounds great! Where should we hunt?" he asked. He walked towards the fresh kill pile.

[*Nimbles*]

"Evermist Valley?" Nimblestep said to the tom. He picked up a wood pigeon and walked away to sit by a patch of briars, where he liked to eat his prey. "Want to sit with me?" he asked Flydew and Darkwater. He twitched his tail and smiled, waiting for their answer.

[fleabittengray]

"Sure." Darkwater said. He picked up a vole and sat down next to Nimblestep. He ate his meal in silence. "You know, I think I'll hunt by mself for now. Maybe we can patrol later?" he said, getting to his paws and leaving the camp.

[Blackstar]

Blacklight stretched flicking stray moss out of his fur. He walked out of the den towards the freshkill pile and cringed at how low it seemed to get in the morning. They never ran out, but it was a silent reminder of what would be seen there in the leafbare. "Sunhigh sounds fine, Nimblestep." he replied, picking a mouse out of the pile. He took a bite of the still warm body, and savoured the taste that poured into his mouth. The Dawn Patrol he had organised must have brought back some fresh kill with them. He'd already begun planning the patrols that would go out today, including the Dawn Patrol and the first hunting patrol. He decided he would organize some of the other patrols before the Hunting patrol at sunhigh.

[fleabittengray]

Darkwater ran back into the camp. He was breathing heavly and his fur was on end. "Come quickly to Evermist Vally! Waist no time! HURRY! he said to the warrios. Something was wrong, They could tell. Darkwater stood for a second and collased. He had a cut on his shoulder. It was deep and bleeding.

[Windfleet]

Flydew smiled graciously at Nimblestep. "Yes, thank you," she mewed, settling down on Nimblestep's right. She began to tear into the vole that she had chosen, closing her eyes briefly at the taste, when Darkwater rushed into the camp. "Darkwater!" she said, shocked. "Slow down. What happened?"

OOC:// Fleabittengray, please try to remember to make your posts 4-5 lines long.

[fleabittengray]

"There is no time to explain! JUst go! Innocent blood could be spilled! GO!" he yowled at the warriors. He tried to get to his feet, but he fell. "You must run him off of our territory. If you dont we will all join StarClan by leafbare!"

[Blackstar]

Blacklight looked at the warrior in confusion, his white tipped tail flicking back and forth. "Who must we run off the territory?" he asked, confused because darkwater had been out hunting, not on a patrol. His green eyes scanned Darkwater's pelt, and he saw the blood that was leaking out of a tear in his shoulder. "someone go get Moonleaf." he ordered. He looked around to see if anyone had done what he had bidden them.