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Post by *Nimbles* on May 26, 2008 16:36:46 GMT -5
[ooc=since sparklefur got banned can eaglepaw have a differnt mentor? or will taht be to difficult?] _________ Ooc|| Sparklefur has only been banned for a week. If her insolence continues, then sure, Eaglepaw can have a new mentor.
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Post by Blazepelt on May 27, 2008 16:41:58 GMT -5
((OCC-Blazepelt can be Bluepaw's mentor if you haven't chosen someone else instead))
Blazepelt watched the meeting, boredom clear in his eyes. He had seen hundreds, maybe even thousands of these meetings. He had never been involved in one before, so he simply didn't care. So a couple of kits were being named and a few apprentices were getting mentors, big deal. Would he be involved at all? He doubted it. Heck, he didn't even want to bother with cats that were practically still kits. The only apprentice he even really liked was Bluepaw, and he could almost become a warrior already. He sighed and continued watching the meeting.
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Post by fleabittengray on May 27, 2008 17:01:53 GMT -5
The blue tom-cat raised his head as he caught the scent of another ThunderClan warrior. His friend, Blazepelt. He meowed a greeting form across the clearing before snpping back to attention.
ooc//ok nims Nimbles: C'mon Gray, you know the rules. It's a 200 word post at it's minimum...
Gray:: sorry, i was in the middle of doing homework an di am slowly losing my muse. ug!
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Kronotenoughtimetologin
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Post by Kronotenoughtimetologin on May 27, 2008 21:54:59 GMT -5
[glow=gray,2,300]::Crowpaw::[/glow]
Narrow chest puffed out prideful Crowpaw’s eyes glittered fiercely with an odd mix of determination, pride, and, possibly, maybe, way way underneath, a tiny itsy bitsy bit of fear. The she-cat wasn’t afraid of her mentor or anything along those lines, but the mention of StarClan always unnerved her. It is not that she does not believe in her warrior ancestors, she believed as much as any cat who had no personal experience with the starry warriors did, it was the ever growing nervousness that they would never except her into their ranks after her time in the forest was done. The she-cat, to her knowledge, did not have a single drop of Clan blood in her veins, and what she had done in her kit-hood would surely not place the young apprentice on her ancestors good side. It wasn’t every day a kit attacked one of her foster littler-mates with killing intent and manage to blind them. The nagging question of whether or not that large tom-kit had live poked at the back of Crowpaw’s mind for a moment before she brushed it away. This was not tine time or place to ponder over the past. She was in the middle of getting a mentor and should not be letting her mind wander down memory lane, no matter how dark and shadowy that lane was with what she had witnessed and done as a kit. Mentally shaking off the ghastly grip of her memories Crowpaw jerked forwards suddenly, stretching up to touch noses with her mentor as her eyes refocused and scanned across the cats gathered around the clearing. She caught Bluepaw’s smile and returned it with a confused look. Why was he smiling? Surly there was nothing for him to be happy about… The she-cat glanced at the other tom and could hardly keep herself from smirking at his obvious irritation.
OOC:// Sorry this took so long. My teachers love piling on projects with less then two weeks left of school. -dies-
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Post by fleabittengray on May 28, 2008 16:39:03 GMT -5
Bluepaw smiled to himself, thinking that maybe teh she-cat wasn't that bad! He flicked his tial at her confuzzed look, tuning away so he wouldn't unnerve her. He was, after all, down pretty much with his trianing. He didn't want to intimidate anyone else with what he knew! A small smirk covered his face, but he quick shivered away from it. Blue bodice rippeled as teh sun moved in the sky, showing that this ceremonys sometims took forever! He allowed a quick movement of audits before turning to Eaglepaw and asking Do you think Crowpaw is settiling in well? His accent was slightly english and very-attractive.
I would hope the little fur-ball was! I don't want her in my den if she will complian all the time! Eaglepaw sai, perhaps a little to loud. He rolle dhis watery blue eyes as Bluepaw hushed him with a slight hiss. Just speaking the truth! He stared cahllengingly at Crowpaw, giivng her a playful wink when he caught her eye. Without waiting for a reaction, he bent to clean his pelt, expecting to recaive a mentor at any moment. HIm and Bluepaw both wanted, and needed, one!
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Post by *Nimbles* on May 29, 2008 9:24:49 GMT -5
Autumnstar; Autumnstar gazed at Smokefur and Crowpaw for a long second as she watched Smokefur complete her ceremony. Deep down she knew that Crowpaw had the makings of a fine warrior, but she often let hate stand in her way. She was paranoid, paranoid of the fact that the Clan hated her because of her heritage, but in fact, they don't. Autumnstar thought that it was through self hatred more so... "May StarClan guide you and your path," Autumnstar said, quickly finishing Crowpaw's ceremony. Her tail twitched before she let her bright green eyes search the crowd once more before they dropped onto another apprentice. "Bluepaw, it's time you got a new mentor," she said and purred, inviting him up to the High Rock. Her words were ominous as if they held all of StarClan's secrets...
Smokefur; Smokefur looked at Crowpaw when he felt the pressure in his nose subside. When she had finally touched his nose in return, she had sort of jerked it forwards which made his nose sting. He wrinkled it slightly and looked at his feet for a second before he returned his gaze back to Crowpaw. Sure she would be a challenge to train, but it didn't stop him... He enjoyed a challenge. His gaqze wandered from Crowpaw down to Bluepaw whom was getting a new mentor. He grinned, knowing who Autumnstar had chosen. He flicked his tail again and blinked brightly, his whiskers moving as his muzzle crinkled with a small smile.
Ooc|| Crap post. Yeaaahhh I know.. I'm just trying to do about seven things : )
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Post by fleabittengray on May 29, 2008 18:44:06 GMT -5
This was it! The moment he had been waiting for! Bluepaw got calmly to his paws, giving Eaglepaw a happy look that said we will soon train together! before turning his head back to Autumstar. He gave her a frinely smile, blue fur craesing a a cats dimple. He looked once at Stormfur adn Crowpaw, hoping thig=ngs went okay with them. Then he looked around teh crowd, wondering who his mentor would be. He smiled at Blazepelt, GRaytail, and RAindance before glanceing at his leader. Blue eyes were glowing with anticipation, hoping, wondering..... Please let it be a good mentor! he prayed silently, to low for Autumsatr to hear. Holding back from leaping into teh air, he stood perfectly still.
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Post by *Nimbles* on Jun 3, 2008 13:06:49 GMT -5
Autumnstar; Autumnstar's eyes glowed as she watched Bluepaw with excitement. She had chosen his mentor to best suit him. Although his mentor was inexperienced, she knew that he would do well with his apprentice. "Bluepaw, it's time you got a new mentor... You stand before StarClan as a worthy apprentice, now you will need a mentor who is calm, patient and caring... Blazepelt will be your mentor," she said with satisfaction. She knew that the two were perfect matches and that Bluepaw would grow up to be a formidable warrior. She twitched her tail with antisipation as she watched Blazepelt's face for his reaction. Over the moons, she was accustomed to be able to tell a cats emotions through their faces and now it was a skill which was very useful to her.
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Post by fleabittengray on Jun 3, 2008 15:24:26 GMT -5
Bluepaw smimled fbrioghtly and looked around for Blazepelt. The two had become friends, but who woul dhave thought that they woul dbecoem mentor and appretnice? He gazed at Autumstar, happiness filling his expressions as he meowe da thankyou to her and waited for Blazepwlt to approch him. He looked around proudly, wondering what everyone else thought of his am Blazepelt.
ooc-eepp...ran out of things to say.....
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Post by *Nimbles* on Jun 9, 2008 5:26:03 GMT -5
Ooc|| -Is waiting for Blazepelt-
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Post by Blazepelt on Jun 11, 2008 18:33:22 GMT -5
((snuck onto my gradma's computer and don't have much time, sorry for the short post))
Blazepelt blinked in surprise. He stood up and walked over to Bluepaw. He couldn't keep a smile from creeping onto his face. He bent over to touch noses with his new apprentice.
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Post by fleabittengray on Jun 11, 2008 18:51:01 GMT -5
Bluepaw winked as his nose made contact with Blaepelt's He felt happy all over!
[00c-uhh..i no it stinks but like i really didnt have anything to go on xD]
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Post by *Nimbles* on Jun 13, 2008 9:43:50 GMT -5
Nimbles: Ooc|| Look guys, I don't go mad often, but i'm sorry, this is just blatantly unacceptable... I remember to about a month ago when you guys gave a like a sentence to work with and I used to make a good sized paragraph about it. It's called good literacy skills. A requirement for this site is good literacy skills. If you don't step in line, you will be deleted... Now, I am going to give you a second chance.
I want you to both edit your post to make them longer, at least 200 words. Yes? I can understnad Blaze's excuse more than yours, Gray. I mean c'mon... A sentence? Surely, even you could see that it wasn't going to slide. If your roleplaying partner doesn't give you much to go on, talk about your characters past, their feelings even the weather!
Why do you think Autumnstar rambles on about Patchpaw so much?
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Post by fleabittengray on Jun 15, 2008 12:20:09 GMT -5
okay nims. i understand. i will try loads harder.
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Brightkit
Young Warrior
A Light in the Darkness
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Post by Brightkit on Jun 16, 2008 15:29:24 GMT -5
Brightkit padded out of the nursery when she heard Autumnstar performing a cerimony. She had been taking a nap for that time, so she was late for the cerimonies. The she-cat parted her jaws into a huge, gaping yawn. Brightkit sat down next to her foster mother, Orchidwing, wrapping her white tail around her paws. She was nearing her sixth moon, and she just couldn't wait until it was her turn to be an apprentice. What got Brightkit nervous was that she was late for the cerimonies. What if Autumnstar thought that she wouldn't make a good warrior? The white-and-brown she-cat looked up at her leader; perhaps Brightkit was just being too self-concious. For now, Brightkit was going to relax and listen to her leader perform the cerimonies. Autumnstar seemed so high up, especially to Brightkit, since she was still fairly small, and Autumnstar was all the way up on the Highrock. Brightkit had so much more to learn in the world, and she just couldn't wait to learn it! Thoughts went through her mind; would she ever find a mate, or make any great accomplishments, or have kits? But those questions couldn't be answered now. The kit's bright amber eyes moved from Autumnstar to her new foster siblings, then back to Autumnstar.
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