Sparkles
StarClan Kit
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Post by Sparkles on Jul 7, 2008 7:18:59 GMT -5
Sparklefur waited in the hollow for her apprentice to come. She felt the autumn breeze going through her pelt. She looked around. the forest is beautiful! She remembered when she was apprentice. Running and looking at the forest for the time! I always wanted to be a warrior! My brother came a warrior so quick! My sisters were almost there, maybe one more moon, but I had many moons before I became a warrior. Sparklefur looked down at her paws. On her leg was a scar, the one from the battle. I was so excited! My sisters and brother was already warriors. But I was still an apprentice... But I was scared too, what if I die? What will happen? So many questions went through my head that day. My mom and dad, they would be sad and grief for me. My siblings they will be so sad! And me? I will never be a warrior… Sparklefur could still feel the pain that she went through approaching the battle, but then her pain lifted. She remembered the rest of the story...
No! I will be a warrior! My clan will win! I and my clanmates will survive! I had faith and confidence; I knew StarClan was by my side and my clanmates. When we got there I froze all my faith and confidence was gone, and doubt and fear came over me. I wanted to flee and go back home, but I have to stay here and prove to the clan I’m ready to come a warrior! My faith and confidence flooded in me, and I was ready to fight! The battle was painful and harsh, I got a huge scrap on my leg, but Thunderclan won! Sparklefur looked up, waiting for Eaglepaw to come.
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Post by fleabittengray on Jul 7, 2008 19:17:39 GMT -5
ooc-you must post at least 200 words. and you can not say what Eaglepaw is doing. only i can.
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
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Post by Sparkles on Jul 8, 2008 7:23:40 GMT -5
ok
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Post by fleabittengray on Jul 8, 2008 8:32:09 GMT -5
ooc-just go back and modify it, and i will post
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
Posts: 179
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Post by Sparkles on Jul 12, 2008 10:01:29 GMT -5
I just did!
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Post by fleabittengray on Jul 12, 2008 19:18:37 GMT -5
A cool breeze blows through my fur, making me comforted. Blue eyes close, and a sigh escapes through my sealed lips. But I know Sparklefur will be waiting for me, so I have to get up and go. But my body doesn't want to move. Then, a voice fills my head. One that I have heard before, but can't really place. [glow=red,2,300]Eaglepaw! Get our fat but up and get going! How else are you going to be the best?[/glow] I shake my head, and look around. No one. But, that voice...so near..... Eh, maybe it is just me.
The voice, though, has left me shakey. It sounded so powerful, invincible... Maybe a bit of training will help, afterall. Getting up, I see my mentor sitting, waiting for me. I trot over to her, paws sending up little puffs of dust as they touch the ground, and give her a curt nod of my head.
"Well, shall we start?" I meow to her, waiting eagerly for her reply. My nine moons on this earth are not going to be wasted. Besides, I already know a little bit from just watching other warriros and such. As I wait for her reply, my mind goes back to that voice. Instantly, it fills my head again.
[glow=red,2,300]Atta boy, Eaglepaw! If only your sister could see you![/glow] Then, it sort-of faded away, leaving me baffeled. Sister? Ha! I don;t think I have any living sisters. Do I?
ooc-the voice if tigerstar. read his bio for details
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
Posts: 179
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Post by Sparkles on Jul 13, 2008 17:00:13 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Yes, of course! Now I'll show you some fighting moves.[/glow] After the moves I decided to let him fight so I can see how much he's improving. I jumped on him and and did some of the moves I taught him today. Then I let him attack, then I jumped on him again. After a few minutes, we went back to camp
[glow=red,2,300]Eaglepaw, we'll do hunting tommorow and then some more battle training.[/glow]After battle training was over I laid in my bed and slept. I fell asleep after 5 minutes, now in my dream. I saw the forest, a different forest than before. This forest darker, and had more undergrowth. I ran through the forest. Scared to deaf what was lurking in the forest. I saw a clearing and I was glad. Cause it might be the only place with sunshine. I sighed with relief. no danger was near! I layed down, warming my fur in the sunning. I felt like grooming for a moon! It was so nice in this clearing! But I knew there danger everywhere, I wouldn't be that lucking if a pack of foxes or badgers came. I decided to call it, the forest of dark. Or the forest of no light, but there was light here in the clearing! Then I bristled my fur as I heared a roar behind me. I turned around, Badger!
I woke up to find myself in the warriors den. I sighed. [glow=red,2,300]It was only a dream. [/glow]
I saw that daylight was here, and I went outside to get fresh-kill, after that I made Bumblepaw get Eaglepaw up. [glow=red,2,300]Come with Eaglepaw, you can train with us today[/glow]
I sighed sooner or later Bumblepaw will need a mentor. Then a ran to the Sandy Hollow.
Can Bumblepaw train with you, for this one time, cause she doesn't have a mentor yet?
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Post by fleabittengray on Jul 21, 2008 9:06:48 GMT -5
ooc-yo, you are still powerplaying! go back and modify it AGAIN
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
Posts: 179
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Post by Sparkles on Aug 3, 2008 15:51:37 GMT -5
ok, I fixed it, sorry I'll be careful next time!
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Post by fleabittengray on Aug 4, 2008 18:33:57 GMT -5
ooc;;still powerplaying
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
Posts: 179
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Post by Sparkles on Aug 5, 2008 11:39:30 GMT -5
Tell me were I'm powerplaying?
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Post by fleabittengray on Aug 5, 2008 20:45:09 GMT -5
I jumped on Eaglepaw. I remembered all my mentor taught me when I was an apprentice and then I will teach it to Eaglepaw.I was the littlest of the apprentices, but I was strong. I always had energy! I always said “yes!” When my mentor asked me to go on a patrol!After training was over, I was very tired, so I went to the warriors den to sleep. It was sunhigh, and my stomach was growling I’ll hunt; my clan needs to be feed first. I’ll see if Eaglepaw wants to come with me. I went to the apprentices den to look for Eaglepaw, but he wasn’t there. I checked everywhere except the nursery. He must be here! I padded to the nursery, I looked inside, and I haven’t been here for such a long time. I closed my eyes to remember the time when I was a kit. But nothing came to me. I sighed, looked in the nursery, but Eaglepaw wasn't there! Where was Eaglepaw?
pretty much teh whole thing
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
Posts: 179
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Post by Sparkles on Aug 6, 2008 12:13:36 GMT -5
sorry I'm not good at this!  |
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Sparkles
StarClan Kit
Cat-lover^^
Posts: 179
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Post by Sparkles on Aug 6, 2008 12:32:21 GMT -5
I fixed it!  |
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Post by fleabittengray on Aug 6, 2008 13:28:17 GMT -5
ooc;;iys okay. aslo, tehy havent even started battle training. you cant just end sometihng that didnt start yet. lol
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