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Post by ravenfeather on Sept 24, 2007 14:12:12 GMT -5
Ravenfeather
[You my friend, you're alot like them]
Her name was Ravenfeather, Russian Blue bod tossed to the side, sending fur rippling and muscles flexing. Smokey grey coloring ran in her family. Her father had it, and his grandfather before him. Her mother had been a tabby, while she was alive. Ravenfeather was pretty sure she was dead by now, along with her father. They were captured by humans, and that spells death for any warrior born free and happy. Death happened anyway to domesticated felines, a shot that proved lethal to all.
Ravenfeather looked around the area, taking the mid-day beauty. In her opinion, the ocean was so much better at night. She had no way of explaining why. Ravenfeather listened to the rhythmic waves going back and forth, back and forth. It seemed to sooth her, it made her feel good about herself. Ravenfeather had no religion, no alliance as some call it. Yes, she acknowledged that there are Starclan, and greater beings above her. Yes, she would obey by their rules when she lived in a terratory in their domain. She just didn't follow what everyone else did. For she was not everyone else. She was Ravenfeather, daughter of Leon, Rogue and Mothflight of Riverclan, undecided path-line, no religion follower. Her hazel eyes blinked and she remembered..
The waves were rocking the earth with such force, felines were being wiped out by the waves. The storm was getting worse by the second, cried for help rang out, only to be answered by the booming on thunder and flashing of lightning. She ran as fast as he could, her parents were gone, captured by humans and her brother Inf was running beside her. Smokey grey pelt running with white. A tree fell down on her right, and they tripped and fell, a third cat near them was instantly killed by a felled tree. Ravenfeather and Inf got up as quick as they could, the water levels getting higher and higher by the second. On the run again, the rain pounded harder and they grew tired. Soon enough they reached where the ocean originally was, before the tsunami exploded. The leaped into the freezing water and swam as far as they possibly could. Water slipping over their heads, everything went black..
Coming out of the memory of the disturbing dream from last night, Ravenfeather looked around. There was nobody around, just the rhythmic beating of the waves. She remembered her brothers and sisters, and the wreckless actions that got them killed. She thought of possibly going back to where it all happened. But nothing would be there, just pain and heartbreak. Nothing was going to bring her parents and siblings back. Nothing ever would. The hole in her heart hurt so much now. She couldn't help but remember all the heartaches. All the pain and suffering that she could only remember now.
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00C: This is Ravenheart, joined under a new name. I know I wasn't exactly friendly before, but im going to try one more time to prove I can be active and loyal to the site. Not intrested in high ranking positions though, not going to go through that again.
CREDiTS: Character and post by Ravenfeather and Lyrics by Breaking Benjamin. DO NOT STEAL.
Ravenfeather
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Post by ~*Speckles*~ on Sept 24, 2007 15:22:06 GMT -5
A ripple on the water, only a ripple of many but this one was made by something other than the splash of water from the falls. Other than the ripple nothing showed of the cat who was soaring through the watery depths, her tan pelt that was swirled with darker tan was short and seemed to be made for the water as her large paws pushed against the water and propelled her forward. Her ears were flat against her skull, trying to keep as much water out as possible as her golden eyes tried to decipher the dark forms of fish in the water. She finally saw a school of fish in the dark waters of the deep. She shot for the surface to renew the air in her lungs, which made another ripple as she came up just enough for her nose to take a breath and then pushed herself towards the fish, her slim body moving with the motion of the plants that grew near the bottom. When she was close enough she shot out and into the school of fish which tried to scatter.
Most did scatter but two didn't, one that fell prey to her sharp teeth and the other was snagged by a sharp claw on her paw. She took both fish into her mouth and swam for the surface again, letting out a stream of bubbles from her mouth that came to the surface of the water and floated there. Soon after the bubbles popped up Spottedleaf's head also appeared, mouth full of fish. Only her head showed as she swam for the shore, towards Ravenfeather. As her paws touched the bottom she smiled through her fish at Ravenfeather before dropping her fish in an already prepared hole and covering them up. She turned back around and looked at Ravenfeather, shaking the water from her pelt as she did.
'Hello Ravenfeather!' Spottedleaf's voice was soft as kit fur as she made her way over to Ravenfeather and sat down nearby. 'How are you doing?' she meowed in the same voice.
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Post by ravenfeather on Sept 24, 2007 16:20:15 GMT -5
Ravenfeather
[You my friend, you're alot like them]
Coming out of the memory of the disturbing dream from last night, Ravenfeather looked around. There was nobody around, just the rhythmic beating of the waves. She remembered her brothers and sisters, and the wreckless actions that got them killed. She thought of possibly going back to where it all happened. But nothing would be there, just pain and heartbreak. Nothing was going to bring her parents and siblings back. Nothing ever would. The hole in her heart hurt so much now. She couldn't help but remember all the heartaches. All the pain and suffering that she could only remember now.
Seeing that another had joined her presence with the sounds of someone slashing in the water, Ravenfeather glanced around looking for the source. Seeing Spottedleaf's tan pelt she felt some relief, her brother's image had been plaguing her for a long time, and she needed someone to help relieve that stress.
She spoke back in a normal soft voice, Hello Spottedleaf, I am fine thank you. How are you doing these days?
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00C: Bleck.
CREDiTS: Character and post by Ravenfeather and Lyrics by Breaking Benjamin. DO NOT STEAL.
Ravenfeather
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Post by ~*Speckles*~ on Sept 24, 2007 17:17:14 GMT -5
Spottedleaf smiled. 'I've been fine. Nothing bad has happened but not extraordinary either.' She grinned and sat down to wash the water out of her pelt. 'Just been fishing, that's exciting isn't it?' She chuckled a little. 'But I wouldn't be anything but a RiverClan cat, I pity the other clans for being afraid of water and not knowing how to fish. I don't know what I'd do without water.' She finished getting the water out of her pelt and then shook herself again to fluff her fur up a little. 'Pretty out there isn't it?' she commented, looking out over the sunlit waters. She flicked the end of her tail and half closed her eyes in content, letting the sun's rays seep onto her coat, drying it the rest of the way.
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Post by ravenfeather on Sept 26, 2007 16:31:08 GMT -5
Ravenfeather
[You my friend, you're alot like them]
Seeing that another had joined her presence with the sounds of someone slashing in the water, Ravenfeather glanced around looking for the source. Seeing Spottedleaf's tan pelt she felt some relief, her brother's image had been plaguing her for a long time, and she needed someone to help relieve that stress.
She spoke back in a normal soft voice, Hello Spottedleaf, I am fine thank you. How are you doing these days?
Hearing Spottedleaf reply, she said in a normal voice as before, Yes. 'Tis silly how some don't fish for food. Being afraid of the water was a whole different thing completely. She probably would have been if she wasn't born and raised a riverclan cat.
Spottedleaf spoke again and Ravenfeather replied, It's beautiful here. Im happy to be living here.
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00C: eh, muse is *raspberry* today.
CREDiTS: Character and post by Ravenfeather and Lyrics by Breaking Benjamin. DO NOT STEAL.
Ravenfeather
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Post by ~*Speckles*~ on Sept 26, 2007 18:03:34 GMT -5
Spottedleaf smiled. 'I wouldn't want to live anywhere else but here.' I could never be a Wind or Thunder or ShadowClanner. She shook her pelt in distaste at the thought of being a ShadowClanner. She didn't like ShadowClan but hadn't voiced her dislike, not wanting to offend. She half closed her eyes. 'So are you just resting here? It is a lovely place for that isn't it? I'm on hunting duty, but I've caught quite a bit and can take a break.' She flicked her tail a little as she proudly remembered all the prey that she had caught.
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