Raven-StarClan

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Name:Raven
Age:
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: StarClan
Rank: Elder
Description:

Pure, snow white she-cat with black on her sides that look like ravens wings. Her tonge is a lite pink and her eyes are amber like her son's, Darkwater. She has long claws and short, sharp teeth. Her tail lis curved and silcky. Raven has a black dot on her tail and a pickish tint to her eyes. Her body is big and bulcky.

Personality:

Kind and calm, she halp settle many fights and battles before she was killed. She trusted all cats and beleaved in StarClan even though she wasn't of any Clan. She beleaved all cats should have a sceond chance. She would give her life for one of her friends. Her heart was big. Shhe loved all cats and was alomost everyones friend. Raven was energetic to a certain ectent. Her main goal was to make sure her kit had a happt life.

History:

She was a kittypet in her kithood. She had a nice family and a playmate, but when the Twoleg kits got older, they didn't want anything to do with the cats, so they sold one cat, but before they could sell Raven, she ran away. Hopeing she could have a good life in the forest, she set out. She met with other kind loners and help then settle arguments. When she set off again, she met a tom named Darkwind. She had thought he was nice. Then he left right before she had her kit. When Darkwater was six moons old, he told Raven he wanted to join a Clan. She said okay. After a week of waiting, she heard a noise behind her. She turned. It was Darkwind. He attaked and she was dead within minutes. The next day, when Darkwater came to find her, he saw Darkwind sitting over his mothers body.

Other:

[~*Speckles*~]

Could you add a little more personality and description? At least five full sentances please.

[fleabittengray]

oaky!

[~*Speckles*~]

Accepted!