Night-Loner

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Name: Night
Moons: 11 moons
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Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Loner
Rank: Warrior
Description:

Stunningly beautiful b.lack as night she-cat. She just has plain gray eyes. White teeth and claws. And a long puffy tail. Her ear tips are red with some light brown. A light, barly visble, black stripe runs down her back and legs and she has 'zebra stripes' on her legs. She has rippling muscles.

Gender: Tom
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Leader
Description:

Black as night she-cat. Has nothing really special about her. She just has plain gray eyes. White teeth and claws. And a long puffy tail. Her ear tips are red with some light brown. A light, barly visble, black stripe runs down her back and legs and she has 'zebra stripes' on her legs. She has rippling muscles.

Personality:

Smart and able to understand some twoleg language. Demanding and stubborn, likes to have a plan for everything. Flrity she goes after most toms, wich annoys her brother.. Energetic and strong. Is allways running and fighting. Crafty fighter and is dangerous in battle. Quick hunter and learner. She can catche enough to feed two cats.

History:

Night was born in the wild behind a roller rink. She didn't belong to any Clan or twoleg and as soon as she and her brother and siter were old enough to eat meat and stop nurseing, they were let to fend for themselves. Night and her siblings taveled and found the forest and the rest of the loners. They found a spot to stay and now they meet there at least one a week. Night was always the smarter of the three.

Other:

[~*Speckles*~]

You need to make your sentances more complete. 'Demanding.' That is not a senctance.

[fleabittengray]

oooooooookkkkkks she is going to die anyways

[~*Speckles*~]

That's better! Accepted!