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Post by raindance on Aug 13, 2007 9:04:15 GMT -5
Alone, Raindance does on a hunt, it is drzzling and she wants to find something quickliy. The gray femme spots a mouse and kills it with a swift bite. She brings it to the clan.
*Note*** RPing posts should be longer.
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Post by ~*Speckles*~ on Aug 13, 2007 11:18:02 GMT -5
[{Raindance, what are you doing? You're supposed to do one post with what you want to say, and then wait for someone else to reply to it.}]
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 13, 2007 11:19:55 GMT -5
Autumnstar watched Raindance out of the corner of her eye. She sighed gently and began to un-cover her fresh-kill. "Raindance?" she called out to the young warrior. "Will you help me take these back to the Clan?" she said to her softly. Before her were several pieces of prey. A small chaffinch, a sparrow, a rabbit and a mouse. She had been hunting all morning, trying to stop her mind wondering to Patchkit. She flicked her tail and waited for her to reply.
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Post by raindance on Aug 13, 2007 11:24:42 GMT -5
okay. anything. *picks up some prey and follows*
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 13, 2007 11:28:50 GMT -5
OoC|| I don't care what you say now, I will teach you how to roleplay properly. Firstly, it will all be in past tense. E.g stumbled, walked, flicked. Secondly, punctuation is luffed. Thirdly, watch what I do.
BiC|| Autumnstar nodded gratefully and pushed her head throw the linchen that covered the camp enterance. She flicked her tail at Raindance, signalling her thanks. "So Raindance, how are you finding being a warrior?" she asked.
OoC|| As you can see, I did not write this: *Autumnstar nodded and walked back to camp* How are you finding being a warrior?
Get it?
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Post by raindance on Aug 13, 2007 11:31:20 GMT -5
[kk] Raindance walked back to the camp with a mothful of prey.
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 13, 2007 11:33:58 GMT -5
"So how are you coping being a warrior?" Autumnstar asked again calmly. She twitched her tail and dropped her share of the prey before picking out a small mouse for herself. She hadn't been eating properly for a while and it had begun to show. Her ribs stuck out slightly and her features were more sharp and angled, giving her an ematiated look. She flicked her ears, even through her ematiated appearence, her eyes were bright and friendly.
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Post by raindance on Aug 13, 2007 13:17:59 GMT -5
"great thanks!"she says picking a vole."Its very exicting!"
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 14, 2007 14:57:09 GMT -5
OoC|| What writing?
BiC|| Autumnstar flicked her tail and smiled at the young warrior. She recalled her times of being a young warrior, how she and her mate, Wolfbane, always used to hunt together. She smiled at the memory but couldn't stop the rest of her thoughts whirring in. Wolfbane's death, the fact she had to take her son, Patchkit away. She shook her head, as if trying to rid the thoughts from her.
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Post by raindance on Aug 14, 2007 16:06:48 GMT -5
Raindance looks at her, worried. "Are you okay? Did you eat a bad peice of prey?" she asked. [srry i cant spell good]
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 15, 2007 3:37:41 GMT -5
OoC|| It's okay about the spelling. Not everyone is perfect! ^^
BiC|| "No, no," she said and bared her teeth slightly. "I'm fine, I just have er-er- stomach ache," she said softly, quickly lying. She twitched her tail and smiled at the warrior. Her ears twitching as if to detect misgivings.
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Post by raindance on Aug 15, 2007 8:12:56 GMT -5
"Oh. Well do you want me to get you something from the medicen cat? I wouldn't mind!" she says softly, licking her paw and drwing it over her face. "Or you could rest and ill get the rest of the prey?"
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 15, 2007 10:21:19 GMT -5
"No, no," Autumnfur said. "You just need to deal with your warrior duties," she said anc smiled. She flicked her tail and looked around unhappily. Where was Patchkit?
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Post by raindance on Aug 15, 2007 10:36:09 GMT -5
"Okay. If your sure. But if you don't feel any better, go see the medicine cat. The last thing we need is a sick cat!" she said wiht a flick of her tail.
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Post by *Nimbles* on Aug 15, 2007 10:37:12 GMT -5
Autumnstar nodded swiftly and padded away slowly, up to the peak of her den before lying down, basking in the sunlight.
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