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Post by *Nimbles* on Mar 26, 2008 11:46:28 GMT -5
So, plot time. We need to get one, or else. To be fair, we've gone through a lot at the moment, we've had a lot of changes but I think we need a plot.
I was thinking...
A rogue goes into RiverClan and convinces them that ThunderClan will attack them. He fakes his death and goes into ShadowClan and convinces them that WindClan will attack them, the rogue then fakes his death again. News of the fights reaches all ears and all four Clans come together to have a battle but the rogue comes with small dogs and cats. The clans fight eachother and the rogue, not knowing their true enemy. The fight ends and the clans realise and come together to beat the rogue.
What do you think?
Suggestions would be niiiiice.
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Post by \\*Rainstorm*// on Mar 26, 2008 14:54:41 GMT -5
sounds cool! The rogue should like, have a grudge on one or all of the clans so he/she would have a reason to make all the others try to destroy each other... or maybe he\she wants to rule the forest all by his onsie, savvy? lol
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Post by --dankheart-- on Mar 28, 2008 19:24:35 GMT -5
Excellent idea. Let me clear this up, though... Rogue goes to RiverClan and convinces them that ThunderClan is going to attack them. Rogue then fakes his/her death and goes to ShadowClan. S/he convinces ShadowClan that WindClan is going to attack them. Rogue then fakes death again.
The "attacks" that the rogue has pretended are going to happen reach the rest of the Clan's ears. They gather together to fight. At the fight the rogue shows up with dogs and cats. Everybody fights each other, confused about their true enemy. The fight soon ends as the Clans realize that the rogue is behind it all and then come together to defeat the rogue.
My Critique:
--- questions && issues ---
[1] The rogue goes to Shadow and RiverClan. He fakes his death in each. What about WindClan? Does he ever visit them? If he does, the Clans would be more confused. If he doesn't, there would be an element of mystery. See next comment.
[2] If he doesn't visit Wind and ThunderClan, Wind/ThunderClan will not know who has been spreading the rumor or about the rogue at all. Because of this, they could be the ones to realize that the rogue is cheating them all.
[3] For the fight. How do the other Clans learn that there will be a fight? One first Clan will want to, of course, but how will the other three Clans get word of it?
[4] At the fight, the rogue shows up with "small dogs and cats." What is the definition for "small"? Regular size? Smaller than normal?
[5] Where do the dogs and cats come from? Two-leg place or are they loners?
[6] The fight ends. How does the fight end? How long has it gone on for? How do the Clan's realize that the rogue is their enemy? [see "[2]"]
[7] They beat the rogue. How? What losses do the Clans sustain? Is the rogue killed? What happens to the cats and dogs that are fighting with the rogue?
[8] Addressing Rainstorm's idea. What kind of grudge? Why should a rogue even have a grudge against the Clans? What aim would he acheive by "ruling the forest"?
--- my ideas && answers to questions posed above ---
[1] The rogue should not visit Wind and ThunderClan. Perhaps he is afraid of those Clan for some reason; bad blood? [see "[8]"] It would also retain the element of surprise. [see "[2]"]
[2] Wind and ThunderClan should be the one to recognize the rogue, especially if Wind or ThunderClan was the Clan he was originally exiled from.
[3] River and ShadowClan want to fight and defend their territories from Wind and ThunderClan. Perhaps ShadowClan wants to fight most, and then send out messangers to have all the Clans gather?
[4] The dogs and cats should be regular size.
[5] The cats should be alley cats and loners, but the dogs should be solely dogs from two-leg place.
[6] ThunderClan should attempt to stop the fight; Autumnstar doesn't want to lose any more warriors. During a lull, Thunder and WindClan should get together. Something has been bothering the leader of WindClan, maybe, and she finally figures it out when she sees the rogue use a move only WindClan knows on another cat. She tells Autumnstar, and they manage to temporarily stop the fight and tell Dankstar and Blackstar about the rogue.
[7] The rogue should be killed and the dogs and cats brought by him/her should retreat at the loss of their leader. The Clans should sustain minimal losses; any characters people want to be killed off should be killed off now. All four Clans come together to beat the rogue. A leader loses a life?
[8] The rogue should have been a former member of WindClan, but then was exiled when he did something bad. Is angry at WindClan for exiling him, and is trying to get his revenge on the Clan. But his aim goes even further to try and get rid of all the Clans, so that he will feel suffeciantly avenged. So as not to let WindClan recognize him, he changed his name and changed his appearance [?] - and he didn't visit them.
The rogue's gender is unspecified - I simply used the male tense for the rogue. This does not mean s/he will actually be a male.
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Post by fleabittengray on Mar 30, 2008 15:07:38 GMT -5
okay, plot 1 is sortof a miny plot thing me and spots are starting but here goes!
1)Everything is changing. The long leaf-bare has left many weak from white and green cough. But all is not peaceful in the woods. Another Clan of rouges lead by the RiverClan exile Darkwind are forming. THey call themselves DarkClan. There leader has a grudge against RIverClan, ever since he was not made deputy. But with every cat weakened byu cold and illness, even the lones are not ready to fight. Only a few know of the rouges son now in RiverClan. HE is not evil, but if all gets out what will happen to him and his kits? And his mate? But while DarkClan rise to power, something else is happeneing. [this is not part of the private plot this is added] WindClan and SHadowClan have formed and alience. They hunt in each others territorys. They train together. But is the allience true? Or false? Trust is broken when a group of WIndClanners, who don't like the idea of forming into a large Clan with ShadowClan as the leaders plan, break into the ShadowClan camp and kill all the kits. All but two. They take them and bring them to DarkClan, begging to join. DarkClan is stadly rising. Darkwind is preparing his cats to fight. And, with news of WIndClan and ShadowClan fighting, it is even better! For WIndClan is known of being friendly with THuinderClan. If they go to THunderClan, ShadowClan will have to go to RIverClan. Then, cwhile fighting breaks lose, kits will be stolen. But there is some who stand in there way. THe ones that know of DarkClan's plans. DarkClan must track them down. These cats are in great danger. Not only of cats, but of a great storm coming. One that may force all cats, loners and Clanners alike, to come together. Fear is on the wind. Death is in the air. Betrayel is colser then you think. Hear that sound? Close to your ears? It's the screams of helpless kits screaming out for their mothers. Not even StarClan belives the Clans are safe from this journey...
okay, yeah. some of it is Darkwind staleing Heathermist and Darkwater's kits. THis will happen. Me and SPots are woking on it now. The rest just came from sctacth [lol nice choose of words] here is number 2
2)Medicine cats in all the Clans are frightened. The sickness from the rats has come back, stronger then ever. The worst part? They don't know how to cure it. Yes, they have dealt with it before. But somehow, the disease changed. It is more violente then ever! Even when the contact StarClan, they can not find a cure. As more and more cats fall ill, they wonder more and more how this happened. Then, when it seems all cats are about to die, a cat asks why ShadowClan seems to be doing better. IT is true. ShadowClan is not as ill. They hunt, train, and have more kits. Could it be their medicine cat has found a cure and is not telling the others? O have they just built a tollerence against it, living closet to the rats? But the truth is, ShadowClan is not doing so well. THeir kits are quiet and skinny. THeir queens are not producing enough milk. THeir exsusted warriors can not find enough prey. All of it on their territory is infectted. IT gets worse. Somme begin to hunt of oters territorys. The Clans are not fit to battle. Not now. But with prey not high in any terrirtoryies, and everyone on edge, that is whatr looks like will happen. WIlll the medicine catas find a cure quick enough? or will the Clans detroy themselves...forever?
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Post by *Nimbles* on Apr 1, 2008 15:52:35 GMT -5
Nimbles:;
Answers:;
[1 & 2] The rogue wouldn't visit two of the Clans, it's irrelevent to which ones at this stage. This way, although the two Clans who haven't seen the rogue they still have to fight against the other two Clans as they are threatened. They will be the 'main' peace makers in the plot.
[3] How the word gets around... I figured that there would be a small border fight or a raid, threatening one of the Clans by another. For example, ShadowClan could raid ThunderClan and give them a warning saying 'I'm on to you, there will be a fight as such a such time, be there.'
[4] By 'small' I meant the dogs. They would be toy dogs but some would be larger, none of them will be larger than a beagle as it would be ridiculous to expect a bunch of cats fight a huge dog and win... The cats would vary from size, they would be like a Clan, just less organised.
[5] I think that the dogs and cats should have all been abandoned by humans so that they are forced to stay together in order to survive. The loner could be a leader of some kind so that they are all under his/her rule. Once the Clan cats find out about the rogue then the dogs and cats can make a decision on which side they are on. They have no StarClan or loyalty...
[6]The Clans realise their enemy and unite to fight them... The fight would go on for days as it would be a series of small fights and then the big fight... Your idea for number six is good.
[7]This answer is basically answered throughout my post. The losses can differ. If needs be, some could make a few cat's that can die. Also, some of us will have to make dog's and at the beginning of the plot I could make a new area for the dog/cat Clan to post. This would mean that we'd host more auditions.
[8]The rogue would maybe want a place for the dog/cat clan. Their isn't enought space in the Twoleg place now for his/her army.
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Post by fleabittengray on Apr 2, 2008 18:23:52 GMT -5
THat is very confuzzing....lol
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Post by Brightkit on Apr 2, 2008 21:25:11 GMT -5
Hmmmmmmmmmmmms... Yeah, I like Nimbles's idea. But I also like the first plot that Gray wrote on this thread. Hmms...
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Post by --dankheart-- on Apr 4, 2008 16:40:53 GMT -5
The thing about Gray's idea of the plot is that it would be mainly featuring Darkwind, which is Gray's own character. So we can't really use that and be fair to the other members.
All right.
We should keep the plot as close to the first version as possible to avoid any confusion. I agree with the toy dogs, but Wind and Thunder should be the ones not told.
Um...
I think we're ready to start. Should we write the bios and then have people apply with the RPing example, so that we can choose the one who has the personality/etc. down for the rogue and followers? After the first few, the ones major for the plot have been chosen, people can make ones they want.
Windfleet's good at bios...
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Post by fleabittengray on Apr 4, 2008 19:20:41 GMT -5
yeah it was just something me and posts are doing with each other so i just posted it but the second one is for the med cats, leaders, etc
and i think we should let the people who dont have high ranks tryout first then mkae bios after tryouts
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Post by grayheart on Apr 12, 2008 22:41:16 GMT -5
i like the rouge plot!
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Post by *Nimbles* on Apr 13, 2008 6:56:28 GMT -5
I'll start to make everything.
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Post by fleabittengray on Apr 14, 2008 18:00:16 GMT -5
yeah!! at least! a plot lol
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Post by mudpath on Jul 31, 2008 12:45:52 GMT -5
It`s interesting i like these plots but..........
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