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May 2, 2008 15:45:40 GMT -5
Post by \\*Rainstorm*// on May 2, 2008 15:45:40 GMT -5
We all have have those plastic smiles We use for those people we pretend to like You know how that feels as well as I We've tried it out ourselves Through that smile all I see is hatred And things I never wanted to But if you're ok, Then I'm ok And I think we'll make it through The good times and the bad We'll laugh through them all And only rarely be sad So if you're ready I'm ready So lets hurry up already and go What do you think? The black or the blue 'Cause whatever you choose, I'm with you One day I'll tell you How I really truly feel So if you don't feel the same way Tell me straight out now Or else I'll just feel like a third wheel Unloved, unused, totally alone So come on and give it to me How do you savor the perfect essence Of me, you And us Throughout our days I'll always like you Whichever we choose; The paths of bliss Or of mournfulness I'll always remember my friend And our wonderful memories That have no end.
Well, this is a poem I wrote not long ago. It made tears come to my mother's eyes (which I thought was strange) and I wanted to see if anyone else liked it. What do you think?
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May 8, 2008 16:09:48 GMT -5
Post by blondie13 on May 8, 2008 16:09:48 GMT -5
I love it!
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May 9, 2008 14:50:53 GMT -5
Post by \\*Rainstorm*// on May 9, 2008 14:50:53 GMT -5
thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;D
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Jul 25, 2008 16:54:45 GMT -5
Post by fleabittengray on Jul 25, 2008 16:54:45 GMT -5
this is great!
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